Sunday, February 21, 2016

Practice IOC


Macbeth Practice IOC

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Grading

Obj A:  7
            ---  I have given myself the grade of a 7 because I feel that the reference I used could have been better chosen and that I could have shown a better understanding of some of the underlying themes.  I felt that I showed a good understanding of the text and the major themes but that I could have done better as well.

Obj B:  6
            ---  I addressed the use of Literary devices but briefly as they were few and far between.  I discussed what the literary devices were and I also talked about how they impacted the two excerpts.  the detail that I used was not as in depth as it could have been and I could have found more examples as well.

Obj C:  4
            ---  My organization was good but there were times where I would switch subject area without mentioning it or I would jump back and forth between multiple themes without meaning to.

Obj D:  4
            ---  I used a variety of language but it was not all formal language.  Many times I used casual words which would cause the reduction of a point.  I also say "like" and "um" a few times which also lead to the loss of a point.


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1 comment:

  1. Nick:
    - Establish context
    - Thesis or end result needed
    - Make sure you're not confusing analysis with paraphrasing- think about HOW (through language and literary devices)Shakespeare is doing whatever you say he's doing and the EFFECT that has on the text
    - Watch tone- a bit too informal at times
    - Can give line number instead of reading the entire line
    - Conclusion?

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